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« Reply #50 on: August 10, 2009, 12:14:48 AM »
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story mai raat hui hay  Roll Eyes Roll Eyes Roll Eyeslol lol lol
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« Reply #51 on: August 10, 2009, 12:16:47 AM »
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then comes a Small boy in between and said

" Bibiji, Doodh wala bill lene aaya hai - ka Kahoon use"

Ha Ha ha Ha  lol lol lol lol lol

haha kahani mein twist u turn? 
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« Reply #52 on: August 10, 2009, 12:26:36 AM »
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haha kahani mein twist u turn? 

Bibiji ghabra ke uth gayi aur saamne kya dekhti hai...HuhHuhHuhHuhHuh??

Apna ramu haath main akhbaar liye khada hai aur doodh waale ka message pad raha hai..

He he Means " Doodh waala bahar khada hai"...

Saari story yahin khatam ho gayi... Neend khul gayi...  lol lol lol lol lol
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« Reply #53 on: December 07, 2009, 11:34:30 AM »
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Bibiji ghabra ke uth gayi aur saamne kya dekhti hai...HuhHuhHuhHuhHuh??

Apna ramu haath main akhbaar liye khada hai aur doodh waale ka message pad raha hai..

He he Means " Doodh waala bahar khada hai"...

Saari story yahin khatam ho gayi... Neend khul gayi...  lol lol lol lol lol

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« Reply #54 on: May 24, 2010, 02:23:58 PM »
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Ok...here's a true story of my Nana's Father who told me this story....

Long ago there was a Boy me, and during my time there was a King.

The king well known well known in his small kingdom called "Dhrol".

One night an incidence took place.

There were two Brahmin brothers and they were very holy and pious.
The Elder one was the worshipper of Goddess Durga.

Once while he was sleeping he had a dream.
Goddess Laxmi came to him and said "I have been buried at a place near the village river and I want to be taken out from that place by a Generous and Holy man. I wish that you dig me out of that place and utilize me for your well being and also a share of it for peoples good."

The Goddess instructed the Elder brother to a place where Precious Gems and Treasure were kept for centuries. Both the brother went to check the place and found a deep bunker at the spot where they were informed it would be found.

As both the brother were unprepared they decided to come back with necessary things to carry the Treasure. While they were closing he bunker the Village Barber saw them and in greed of money told the entire thing to the King.

The King for the greed of Treasure took his Soldiers along with him and stopped the brothers in path.
He demanded half the amount of the Wealth they dig. The brothers agreed as they did not have greed of wealth.
The entire treasure was taken from the bunker.

The elder brother said "We are taking money from this place it should be respected. I will make a Swastika and come back."

The King got greedier and ordered his Soldiers to bury the elder brother in the Bunker. The Soldiers did as was told.
The elder brother was buried forever. But the king did not kill the younger brother as he was young.

But seeing what injustice was done to his brother the younger brother gave this curse "O greedy kind. Hence forth you and your entire family will have child born with mental defect. And you hence forth will be deprived of food."

The King considered it was just a threat and did not pay heed to it.
When he came back it was already Lunch time. He sat for Lunch in his Palace.
But just when the servant poured some Ghee to the king’s meal he saw the face of the Elder brother whom he had killed and he was saying that "you shall pay for your deed."

The day onward the king saw the elder brother in every thing he tried to eat. He lost his mental state and soon became mad.

Its said the curse still goes on as the last heir of the Kingdome Dhrol the last Princess Padmavati died years ago and she too was born with mental disturbance."

Its said that one who takes the name of Dhrol remains hungry for entire day thus villagers calls it or gives direction to the passerby as "The front Village (Samu Gaam in Gujarati.)"

How do I know this cose I was a young kid when I had seen this happen before independence. Smiley
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« Reply #55 on: October 06, 2010, 10:16:53 AM »
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As I am not talented enough to create my own story, I'd like to offer you a short story, which I have been reading this evening.
 
When this story was first published in the magazine The New Yorker in 1948, it outraged its readers.It has been described as a "powerful," "haunting," and "chilling" tale, and its meaning has been debated vigorously since its publication.

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